(Hi I'm the idiot who put in an anon comment by accident T_T )
COMMENCE THE THOROUGH WORSHIPING OF Z
Was he asking permission on Alex's behalf? No, that was too weird. On re-reading the story, I thought it was awesome that this ended up being the case XD
Actually in the second read I was surprised at how short this piece actually is, cause it felt like much more than the wordcount suggests. It has to be because it is so streamlined and to-the-point. "Z's current estimation of Val" is accurate enough for a Sage though; I can't think of anything I would have done different! My drop-dead FAVORITE part was in the beginning when Val mentioned wanting to help, but was already sure that he didn't fit in ;_; It sang absolutely true to character.
Ariiiiiiiiiiiii you are the best bro a guy could have, man. I hope ONE of my characters learns how to really embrace Ari's bro-ness. Rae would think Ari is awesome.
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Date: 2011-03-20 12:55 am (UTC)COMMENCE THE THOROUGH WORSHIPING OF Z
Was he asking permission on Alex's behalf? No, that was too weird. On re-reading the story, I thought it was awesome that this ended up being the case XD
Actually in the second read I was surprised at how short this piece actually is, cause it felt like much more than the wordcount suggests. It has to be because it is so streamlined and to-the-point. "Z's current estimation of Val" is accurate enough for a Sage though; I can't think of anything I would have done different! My drop-dead FAVORITE part was in the beginning when Val mentioned wanting to help, but was already sure that he didn't fit in ;_; It sang absolutely true to character.
Ariiiiiiiiiiiii you are the best bro a guy could have, man. I hope ONE of my characters learns how to really embrace Ari's bro-ness. Rae would think Ari is awesome.