On re-reading the story, I thought it was awesome that this ended up being the case XD
HA HA WHOOPS. That was not meant to be the case but I am dumb and did not realize that the waving could be interpreted that way. BUT LET'S PRETEND MAYBE THIS IS WHAT HAPPENED NOW!
My drop-dead FAVORITE part was in the beginning when Val mentioned wanting to help, but was already sure that he didn't fit in ;_;
NOW THIS I DID ON PURPOSE. I'm glad you liked that part, as I was really happy with it myself. Val is a great character! I've realized recently that there's a lot more vulnerability there than I originally thought.
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Date: 2011-03-20 01:43 am (UTC)HA HA WHOOPS. That was not meant to be the case but I am dumb and did not realize that the waving could be interpreted that way. BUT LET'S PRETEND MAYBE THIS IS WHAT HAPPENED NOW!
My drop-dead FAVORITE part was in the beginning when Val mentioned wanting to help, but was already sure that he didn't fit in ;_;
NOW THIS I DID ON PURPOSE. I'm glad you liked that part, as I was really happy with it myself. Val is a great character! I've realized recently that there's a lot more vulnerability there than I originally thought.
Rae would think Ari is awesome.
Maybe they can play Mario Kart together. C: